We were in the forest, me and my friends Juanjo and Pepito. We had visited the neighboring camp because four days ago they made us two jokes and this was horrible. We did our revenge.
Our revenge was two jokes as they, but our jokes were better. We had caught some ants these days, and at the night I put the ants in their tents. They went out of the tents and when they opened, we shooted they a lot of water, our revenge was very funny. They were screaming and running around the camp.
The next day we help they, and at the night we did all together a bonfire, we sat down around the bonfire and we told some horror stories. This camp was unbelievable.
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Take revenge
Play a joke on someone
Make or light a bonfire