Some people think that advertising, does more harm tan good. Maybe, they don´t think that advertising could be helpful. However the advertising is around the world.
From my point of view the advertisements are very useful, often, I could know the existence of a lot of products, that I never knew It could exist! For example, the other day surfing on the internet, an advertising of a helmet that could reproduce what you think in a TV! As same as me last Monday, my friend could find in an advertisement, one page to help third world childrens.
Finally, for that and more things advertisements are not bad, advertisements are more useful that we can imagine. I am disagree with the idea of the ¨advertising are harm¨
advertising, does --- advertising does
ResponderEliminarHowever the advertising is around the world.--- However, advertising is around the world.
, often, I could know --- I can often know/discover
that I never knew It could exist --- that I would never know they exist
an advertising of a helmet --- an advertisement of a helmet
As same as me--- Similarly,
childrens --- children
I am disagree--- I disagree
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