martes, 20 de mayo de 2014

Opinion essay, Individual sport are better than team sports

Advantages and siadvantages of individual or team sports.
First I´m going to say that play in team or alone is very different, nevertheless you will have to try the most of you in the two things.

In one hand play alone are that you are the responsability of you, you can win or lose. You don´t depend on the other peers, is only you, although is not the best idea because you are not having fun.

On the other handplay in team I think is better, because you have more fun with your friends or partners however maybe you couldn´t win when ever you want, it depends of your partners. Lastly, another disadvantage is to train, is better train in team tan alone.

In conclusión, for me is better the team sports, more funny, ejoyable and maybe it can make you win.

1 comentario:

  1. Playing in a team / playing team sports
    Playing individual sports
    In one hand play alone are that you are the responsability of you -- One the one hand, playing
    On the other handplay in team I think is better -- Punctuation
    is better train --- it is better to train (infinitives and gerunds)
    conclusión --- conclusion
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    COHESIÓN: 0,5
    CORRECCIÓN: 1,5
    RIQUEZA: 1,5
    Mark: 5

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